Just Let Me Hold You
by Josh Krajcik
I am a full grown woman
And I can make it on my own
I've spent most of my life that way
A warrior, aloof, alone.
But what is life if no one needs you?
And you don't need anyone?
Then this life has lost it's meaning
And there's no room for love or fun.
You have to let your guard down
Let someone in your heart
Eventually or you will see
Your book end before it starts.
You have to make the decision
To protect yourself or risk
Love breaking your heart by loving
Or from the love you made it miss.
Either way, at the end of the day
Whether woman, man or child
We all need the arms of others
To just hold us for a while.
I'd rather hurt by losing
Than never giving it a try
Even when your every Hello
Is followed by Goodbye.
If needing love is weakness
Then let my weakness be
I'll be the warrior tomorrow, love
If tonight, you'll just hold me.
And when it comes your time to hurt
My love will lift you high
Bare my strengthened warrior's shoulder
As a place for you to cry.
One alone is not very strong
But two entwined can be
And a three-fold cord cannot be broken
When it's you and God and me.
You may think that I am foolish
When I reveal my soul to view
But I trust you with my weaknesses
As I do the same for you.
We were not created to be alone
But to need what we don't possess
From others who need what we can give
And to those, should gladly bless.
Tomorrow, I may be a lion again
A formidable foe to fight
But I just need to know that I can let go
spur of the moment poem
just now
©by Voo
April 20, 2019
11:16 a.m.
I don't care how spur of the moment this is, it is a very good poem. I feel for this woman, whoever she is. She doesn't want to be alone. And she shouldn't! She needs the main guy from WOTW or the equivalent of him. If I was that guy I'd say, "Take - a - chance - on - me - Baby!
ReplyDeleteI love it. Very heartfelt! (for a spur of the moment poem). But sometimes love comes through a spur of the moment encounter. Right? (Raised eyebrow and a grin). Listen to ME! This poem has got me pumped.... Awww Dave, you hopeless romantic!!!
LOL LOL LOL you just gotta find a way to insert the un-named guy from WOTW into things, don'tcha???? lol this was a spur of the moment very romantic true life personal write but yeah...it is what it is. it was what it was. DAVE!!!! lol (thanks)
ReplyDeleteWell YEAH! We can’t forget about him! I didn’t call him D’Sal this time although I wanted to. He’s so much like me too. Unforgettable! Right?! ... Yes! Oh YES! You’re unforgettable, Dave!!!! ❤️🌹😘😉 ..................I thought so! 🙇🏻♂️
ReplyDeletehe has never told me his name yet so I don't know it.
DeleteIt's snowing and sleeting here today...you? a winter wonderland at last
Hey, I I wrote that response almost a year and a half ago! You just now finding it? (Teasing you)
DeleteIt’s done the same here. It’s certainly a winter wonderland alright! Why didn’t it do this during the Christmas holidays? 🤷🏻♂️
It’s purdy though…… ❄️ ⛄️ 🌟
Wow! This poem still gets to me…….This “you/your unnamed guy in the poem better open his eyes! That’s all I’ve got to say……… oh yeah…………. well, never mind……..
ReplyDeletesmile
DeleteI'd rather hurt by losing
ReplyDeleteThan never giving it a try………
I love this line!
If you never take chances on love then the loss has already come…… it’s still a wonderfully written and beautiful poem, El Voo!
Thank you, El D. Got a new Aachoo Voo episode up for ya to read
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